Chapter 3: And a Stick to Beat the Devil With, page 2

Chapter 3: And a Stick to Beat the Devil With, page 2


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  1. Josph says:

    I love verbs being used as sound effects

    • Beka says:

      Me too. It’s way more straightforward than trying to sound it out. Plus, it can be unintentionally hilarious. XD

  2. Dan P says:

    Makes for a much clearer image than exessive motion lines, although I prefer a good onomatopeia myself…

  3. Rosie says:

    It puts you in the moment so that you hear the sound effects in your mind as you read.

  4. maggPi says:

    The only verb there that is not some form of onomatopoeia is “shake.”

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